to76: I loved your psalm, i especially liked the metaphors you gave about you being in trouble and God rescues you at sea, the anchor one in particular was my favorite good job
to 13: I loved your Psalm, i loved how you asked God a question on the first line and then on the second line you would answer it. I especially liked this question and answer "why do you still love us when we always fail you? your love is amazing, you always love us" i liked it because its true, God's love for us is amazing, great job with your psalm
Good job. Your psalm was very real and modern, so it was easily relatable to many people. I also like how you thank God for your gifts and still remember that God doesn't find you better than anyone else, keeping all pride out of the situation.
Your psalm was very thankful, and that is good. You stated that we, as humans, do mess up, but you said in a very good way that He will not stop loving us, even though our mistakes are innumerable.
Your fortress simile was clever and good. You also intrigued me when you said God catches us when we are in need, and even though we aren't always trusting him, he will still aid us in strife.
I appriciate this psalm because it covered a lot of topics about God. It seems that you have a lot of questions about God and why he did so much for us. Also about how he forgives us. I agree. And I really liked this because as I am coming closer and learning more about God, although I do have so many questions about everything! Even though I have questions, I try to use Gods words to help guide me in his path. Just like you said on the second to last line.
This was a very simple but at the same time amazing prayer to God. Everyword that you typed I completely agree with and I noticed how blessed I am with all this. For everything.
I really liked the end of your psalm! I agree when you talk about how we've should have died, but he saved us. It's very deep of you and you did a good job with the whole thing!
I thought the line "Like a doctor you stitch my heart together". It really symbolizes how God pieces you back together by saving you in modern terms. It is a great twist on classic sayings.
Overall, your psalm was really good. But what inspired me was how you gave all aspects of God (love, grace, etc.) and put them in metaphors. It really helped me think about it and how deep and wide his love and grace go. You did a really good job with this!
Your psalm was very sincere and I could definitely feel your emotion. You should know that I am praying for you and that you will be able to find God. Just keep trying and praying to Him and know that even if you don't see Him, He is there, watching and listening to you.
To 99, I loved your Psalm! Especially the last paragraph. You asked the questions that fill my mind rather often. It really spoke to me and hopefully God will help us find the answers!
To 76, Your psalm is incredible!! I absolutely loved the objects you used to paint a picture of our relationship with God. I love how you asked God really specific things, it was really humble. Also, I loved your phrase, "familiar land" because it is so true. In God, is where we feel safest and securest, but for some reason we still want to stray from him. Thank you for writing that inspiring and relatable psalm.
To 115, Your psalm is great! I absolutely love that you repeated the line, "Thank You!" It's a simple phrase but one we do not nearly say enough to God. Keep on thanking! :)
I think it's awesome how you admit that we underappreciate God so much. Which is entirely true. And how you described it was nice. One thing that is kind of strange is how much you were sorry. Everything was "I did this wrong," and "I did that wrong."
To: 55 The Psalm you wrote had a lot of meaning. We really do need to keep praising God, evreywhere,all the time. I think you expressed that very well.
To:398 The synonyms you used in your psalm describe God perfectly. We can never get away from him. He clings to us, so we must cling to Him, in good times and in bad.
I have the same problems. Everything seems to be falling around you and that God is not with you. But I had to learn that it might take some time for God to help you. So just put the problems in his hands and don't worry about it.
To 16 Even when we have problems and we know God id with and we pray to him in the hard times but yet we still stop and and try to save ourselves. We have to know and trust an give our love to the creator like he gives his love to us and your psalm said that real truth about haw we treat that.
To 75 This Psalm was great! You really express how much God means to you. This is one of the best Psalms on the page. I especially love where you say that we are scared of the truths that He presents to us. That is so true. We do hide, we want things to go our way, but you make that clear that it is not true. Keep up the amazing work.
To 17 We all go through hard times and when we do we all feel misrible and down like you said but we have to stand stron and know that God is in control becaus ehe is and it is all in due time. Great message
To 93 This seems pretty obvious. Maybe if you used some more love towards God. It is obvious that he loves us. It is awesome that you said that. But we want to see stuff from the heart. Everyone doesn't want to read the same stuff over and over again.
Great! I love how descriptive it was and how you named the specific ways God has blessed you. It all flowed very well and you got your point across. Great Job!
To 158 I can not get over how much I completely love your Psalm! I also struggled in believing in something I can't see, but your Psalm reminded me there IS a God who is with me every step of my difficult life.
Awesome job! I loved the description and comparisons of God's love! it all flowed together and I could see and tell how you felt as you wrote this. Your word choice was great and I just loved this Psalm. Fantastic job!
Very deep! It really makes the reader think and I LOVE that! I like your comparison of the father and son and I really liked how you went deeper into that. Very well written and very good job describing how you feel. Beutiful work!
I like how you're praising God about the gifts He's given you. My favorite part was how you described a certain gift. I also liked how you ended it talking about how if it's God's will, you can do anything through him.
To 19 I thought that yours was very well-written and I felt that I could connect to a lot of what you were saying. I have often asked a lot of the questions you wrote in your psalm, and also I loved your ending!
I really like how you compare our sins to rust; we really are damaged because of it and sometimes we can't be fixed. I love how in the end you're giving God complete control over you're life.
That was really powerful. I love how faithful and unafraid you sound at the end of your Psalm; telling Satan off and everything. I can also relate to what you were asking from God. Sometimes I really need his help in knowing what's right and what's wrong.
That was really powerful. I love how faithful and unafraid you sound at the end of your Psalm; telling Satan off and everything. I can also relate to what you were asking from God. Sometimes I really need his help in knowing what's right and what's wrong.
Know that God will show himself to you at just the right time, so don't leave him. He has your back and will not just leave you to fend for yourself. I'm praying for you, don't give up!
Dear 18, Your psalm really reached out to me. I know how it feels to feel like your just making it through. Just remember God has a plan for you. I felt the same way a little while back and I just asked for the Lords help, and now I know that I can do it. And I know you will to!! I will be praying for you!!
I am praying for you, and I know what you are going through. I have been through that time before, and it's hard. But you have to stay strong, and just keep praying. Just keep swimming, because God has a plan. :)
I loved how you talked about how hard it is to give into peer pressure with all the bad things that happen all around us without us being able to actually see God. It can be very hard to keep faith sometimes, and I will be praying for you.
Your Psalm was wonderful. It was super easy do relate and understand your word pictures. I am and will be praying for you. God loves you and made you wonderfully!
to *26* Your Psalm was amazing! I love how you were so honest and what you said was so relatable. I liked how you said we can't stand alone. I feel the same way a lot of times, and it can be really hard to trust God instead of worldly things.
23: I like your imagery in this, especially because I can really understand, because of my love for music. I know God will fit you in a chord someday that shows you how beautiful you sound to others
78: I loved your ways of speaking through metaphors. I can imagine how all the more beautiful even during the day. I pray for your brother's light, and may your light shine bright forever.
To 29 The truth behind your psalm mirrored my thoughts and point in my relationship with God. I will pray for you, and I hope we both realize the truth in God and his word
Follow the Son The seed of true beauty is planted inside. With Sun it blooms, a new sunflower shines! When the blossom follows the Sun, It wins the fight the new day begun. When it’s all said and done, Night comes and the battle had been won. Still the Sunflower is left standing, New seeds are landing. Now a field of flowers begins to grow, And just like them we all know, True-Beauty comes from above. It can only flourish if we live and love.
7 But the Lord said to Samuel, “Do not look on his appearance or on the height of his stature, because I have rejected him. For the Lord sees not as man sees: man looks on the outward appearance, but the Lord looks on the heart.” – 1st Samuel 16:7 (ESV)
(17)Iron sharpens iron, and one man sharpens another. (19) As in water face reflects face, so the heart of man reflects the man. ` Proverbs 27:17; 19 (ESV)
Follow the Sun is a poem God gave to me about beauty. It really started out being a note to remind the 8th grade girls at my school that they are beautiful. I struggle with my self-image every day, so I know it feels nice when someone tells you “You’re pretty,” or “I like your shoes.” Just little things can make any day brighter, and so I decided to redeem notes by putting encouraging notes in my friends’ lockers. The catch is that they don’t know it’s from me, which I love because I sincerely hate the spot light. I can’t sit in the dead center or the front of the room when something is going on. It makes me feel that everyone is watching me, I immensely hate that feeling. Anyway, God gave me “Follow the Sun” while I was just editing my note, for my friends, in “Reminders,” on my iPad. Eventually it became something much more different than I thought, but it still serves it purpose in telling those who listen that they are and can be beautiful if they “Follow the Sun”.
to 18
ReplyDeletepraying for you
just know God is always there!
to76:
ReplyDeleteI loved your psalm, i especially liked the metaphors you gave about you being in trouble and God rescues you at sea, the anchor one in particular was my favorite
good job
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ReplyDeletei like how you talked about a particular subject and not just a general time
praying for you
to 13:
ReplyDeleteI loved your Psalm, i loved how you asked God a question on the first line and then on the second line you would answer it. I especially liked this question and answer "why do you still love us when we always fail you? your love is amazing, you always love us" i liked it because its true, God's love for us is amazing, great job with your psalm
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ReplyDeleteI loved how you described the different things you talked about
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ReplyDeleteI realyy liked your psalm and how you compared things to describe God. I really enjoyed reading your psalm.
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ReplyDeleteI loved your psalm and how you were very honest with it
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ReplyDeleteI liked how your psalm was about how god has really helped you with your life
To 16,
ReplyDeleteYour psalm was very deep and touching. It also could relate to anyone when they are in doubt. Good job, and I hope you find the answers in your heart.
To 99,
ReplyDeleteGood job. Your psalm was very real and modern, so it was easily relatable to many people. I also like how you thank God for your gifts and still remember that God doesn't find you better than anyone else, keeping all pride out of the situation.
To 81,
ReplyDeleteYour psalm was very thankful, and that is good. You stated that we, as humans, do mess up, but you said in a very good way that He will not stop loving us, even though our mistakes are innumerable.
to 29
ReplyDeleteLoved your Psalm. I can really relate. I'll keep you in my prayers.
To 26,
ReplyDeleteYour fortress simile was clever and good. You also intrigued me when you said God catches us when we are in need, and even though we aren't always trusting him, he will still aid us in strife.
to 158
ReplyDeleteGood job. I like how you explained in a more modern way. I'll pray that God becomes more clear to you.
TO 54:
ReplyDeleteI appriciate this psalm because it covered a lot of topics about God. It seems that you have a lot of questions about God and why he did so much for us. Also about how he forgives us. I agree. And I really liked this because as I am coming closer and learning more about God, although I do have so many questions about everything! Even though I have questions, I try to use Gods words to help guide me in his path. Just like you said on the second to last line.
to 57:
ReplyDeleteThis was a very simple but at the same time amazing prayer to God. Everyword that you typed I completely agree with and I noticed how blessed I am with all this. For everything.
To 89,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the end of your psalm! I agree when you talk about how we've should have died, but he saved us. It's very deep of you and you did a good job with the whole thing!
To 73...
ReplyDeleteI thought the line "Like a doctor you stitch my heart together". It really symbolizes how God pieces you back together by saving you in modern terms. It is a great twist on classic sayings.
To 131,
ReplyDeleteOverall, your psalm was really good. But what inspired me was how you gave all aspects of God (love, grace, etc.) and put them in metaphors. It really helped me think about it and how deep and wide his love and grace go. You did a really good job with this!
To 29,
ReplyDeleteYour psalm was very sincere and I could definitely feel your emotion. You should know that I am praying for you and that you will be able to find God. Just keep trying and praying to Him and know that even if you don't see Him, He is there, watching and listening to you.
To 14
ReplyDeleteI like the question format and how you ask questions and leave us with questions.
To 99,
ReplyDeleteI loved your Psalm! Especially the last paragraph. You asked the questions that fill my mind rather often. It really spoke to me and hopefully God will help us find the answers!
to 9
ReplyDeleteI really like your Psalm because your being truly honest and my favorite part was I'm ike a tree without its branch excellant job.
To 76,
ReplyDeleteYour psalm is incredible!! I absolutely loved the objects you used to paint a picture of our relationship with God. I love how you asked God really specific things, it was really humble. Also, I loved your phrase, "familiar land" because it is so true. In God, is where we feel safest and securest, but for some reason we still want to stray from him. Thank you for writing that inspiring and relatable psalm.
To 115,
ReplyDeleteYour psalm is great! I absolutely love that you repeated the line, "Thank You!" It's a simple phrase but one we do not nearly say enough to God. Keep on thanking! :)
To 99
ReplyDeleteI think it's awesome how you admit that we underappreciate God so much. Which is entirely true. And how you described it was nice. One thing that is kind of strange is how much you were sorry. Everything was "I did this wrong," and "I did that wrong."
To: 55
ReplyDeleteThe Psalm you wrote had a lot of meaning. We really do need to keep praising God, evreywhere,all the time. I think you expressed that very well.
To:398
ReplyDeleteThe synonyms you used in your psalm describe God perfectly. We can never get away from him. He clings to us, so we must cling to Him, in good times and in bad.
To 316
ReplyDeleteI loved your psalm and the way you compared things to God
To 29...
ReplyDeleteI have the same problems. Everything seems to be falling around you and that God is not with you. But I had to learn that it might take some time for God to help you. So just put the problems in his hands and don't worry about it.
To 89 ...
ReplyDeleteVery true! We don't deserve his mercy but we get it. I liked how you talked about how brilliant his creations is.
To 16
ReplyDeleteEven when we have problems and we know God id with and we pray to him in the hard times but yet we still stop and and try to save ourselves. We have to know and trust an give our love to the creator like he gives his love to us and your psalm said that real truth about haw we treat that.
To 312
ReplyDeleteI loved your Psalm! Everything flowed so well and I adored the part about how our sins out number the grains of sand on the earth.
To 75
ReplyDeleteThis Psalm was great! You really express how much God means to you. This is one of the best Psalms on the page. I especially love where you say that we are scared of the truths that He presents to us. That is so true. We do hide, we want things to go our way, but you make that clear that it is not true. Keep up the amazing work.
To 17
ReplyDeleteWe all go through hard times and when we do we all feel misrible and down like you said but we have to stand stron and know that God is in control becaus ehe is and it is all in due time. Great message
To 93
ReplyDeleteThis seems pretty obvious. Maybe if you used some more love towards God. It is obvious that he loves us. It is awesome that you said that. But we want to see stuff from the heart. Everyone doesn't want to read the same stuff over and over again.
Psalm 62,
ReplyDeleteI love the metaphor you used with the rust. It's a great reminder that God has washed us white as snow! Great job!
To 71
ReplyDeleteGreat Psalm over all But could use a little more description towards God And his love for you
Psalm 7,
ReplyDeleteAmen! ANYTHING is possible with God!
To 128:
ReplyDeleteGreat! I love how descriptive it was and how you named the specific ways God has blessed you. It all flowed very well and you got your point across. Great Job!
To 158
ReplyDeleteI can not get over how much I completely love your Psalm! I also struggled in believing in something I can't see, but your Psalm reminded me there IS a God who is with me every step of my difficult life.
Psalm 29,
ReplyDeleteLoved your Psalm-super deep! I will be praying for you. Don't worry, sometimes you have to fall for something better to fall together.
To 43
ReplyDeleteLove how you made God the Sun and us the planet and stars because that is how it should be. us orbiting him no the other way around
Psalm 81,
ReplyDeleteLove the last two lines!!
Psalm 63,
ReplyDeleteIm impressed!!
144...
ReplyDeleteThat was a great psalm. It showed how much God challenges us through life.
To: 300
ReplyDeleteAwesome job! I loved the description and comparisons of God's love! it all flowed together and I could see and tell how you felt as you wrote this. Your word choice was great and I just loved this Psalm. Fantastic job!
To: 32
ReplyDeleteVery deep! It really makes the reader think and I LOVE that! I like your comparison of the father and son and I really liked how you went deeper into that. Very well written and very good job describing how you feel. Beutiful work!
To: 351
ReplyDeleteThis says and shows that God is our creator and master of everything. Nice Work
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ReplyDeletethis psalm was awesome and applied to my life too.
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ReplyDeletethese are good words to remember when we feel alone or are just having a bad day. nice job!
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ReplyDeleteI like how you're praising God about the gifts He's given you. My favorite part was how you described a certain gift. I also liked how you ended it talking about how if it's God's will, you can do anything through him.
To 19
ReplyDeleteI thought that yours was very well-written and I felt that I could connect to a lot of what you were saying. I have often asked a lot of the questions you wrote in your psalm, and also I loved your ending!
To 62...
ReplyDeleteI really like how you compare our sins to rust; we really are damaged because of it and sometimes we can't be fixed. I love how in the end you're giving God complete control over you're life.
To 74...
ReplyDeleteLoving how you described God's everlasting love for all of us. Great job:)
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ReplyDeleteThat was really powerful. I love how faithful and unafraid you sound at the end of your Psalm; telling Satan off and everything. I can also relate to what you were asking from God. Sometimes I really need his help in knowing what's right and what's wrong.
To 5...
ReplyDeleteThat was really powerful. I love how faithful and unafraid you sound at the end of your Psalm; telling Satan off and everything. I can also relate to what you were asking from God. Sometimes I really need his help in knowing what's right and what's wrong.
To 3...
ReplyDeleteThis is another great description of God's love, grace, and mercy. You depict Him so well that you must have a close relationship with God.
To 117...
ReplyDeleteI love the message of the Psalm
To 124...
ReplyDeleteGood descriptive words
To 3
ReplyDeleteYou gave a great picture of God's love. You must know a lot about the Bible and God. Fantastic Psalm
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ReplyDeleteYours is short but captures God's power perfectly. I like how you talk about God's power to us of that as a bug. AMEN!
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ReplyDeleteAmen! This is a wonderful psalm! The Lord is mighty and powerful
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ReplyDeletethis here psalm of yours is a good psalm
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ReplyDeleteI thought that your psalm did a great job at describing things we take for granted. I loved it.
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ReplyDeleteKnow that God will show himself to you at just the right time, so don't leave him. He has your back and will not just leave you to fend for yourself. I'm praying for you, don't give up!
to 58
ReplyDeleteyour psalm was great and i loved how true it was. I can really relate to that
Dear 18,
ReplyDeleteYour psalm really reached out to me. I know how it feels to feel like your just making it through. Just remember God has a plan for you. I felt the same way a little while back and I just asked for the Lords help, and now I know that I can do it. And I know you will to!! I will be praying for you!!
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ReplyDeleteI am praying for you, and I know what you are going through. I have been through that time before, and it's hard. But you have to stay strong, and just keep praying. Just keep swimming, because God has a plan. :)
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ReplyDeleteThank you so much! I just feel like I don't deserve to be here, and that Jesus should be standing in my place. :)
to 29:
ReplyDeleteI love the description in your writing and I hope God will lead you to find him!
To 164...
ReplyDeleteI loved how you talked about how hard it is to give into peer pressure with all the bad things that happen all around us without us being able to actually see God. It can be very hard to keep faith sometimes, and I will be praying for you.
To 92:
ReplyDeleteI love your title, and I love all the connections to the bible. Also, VOCAB WORD *highfive*
To 29,
ReplyDeleteyou did a good job of writing what you actually think.
Dear 64,
ReplyDeleteYour Psalm was wonderful. It was super easy do relate and understand your word pictures. I am and will be praying for you. God loves you and made you wonderfully!
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To 75:
ReplyDeleteHow true. We seem like a speck of dust when we see the power of God's creation. The rush of life today makes us so blasé to what is really out there.
to *26*
ReplyDeleteYour Psalm was amazing! I love how you were so honest and what you said was so relatable. I liked how you said we can't stand alone. I feel the same way a lot of times, and it can be really hard to trust God instead of worldly things.
23: I like your imagery in this, especially because I can really understand, because of my love for music. I know God will fit you in a chord someday that shows you how beautiful you sound to others
ReplyDelete78:
ReplyDeleteI loved your ways of speaking through metaphors. I can imagine how all the more beautiful even during the day. I pray for your brother's light, and may your light shine bright forever.
4,
ReplyDeleteI loved your great comparisons! I loved how you made points like grieving over sin that no one ever made! It was amazing!
4,
ReplyDeleteI loved your great comparisons! I loved how you made points like grieving over sin that no one ever made! It was amazing!
To 29
ReplyDeleteThe truth behind your psalm mirrored my thoughts and point in my relationship with God. I will pray for you, and I hope we both realize the truth in God and his word
Follow the Son
ReplyDeleteThe seed of true beauty is planted inside.
With Sun it blooms, a new sunflower shines!
When the blossom follows the Sun,
It wins the fight the new day begun.
When it’s all said and done,
Night comes and the battle had been won.
Still the Sunflower is left standing,
New seeds are landing.
Now a field of flowers begins to grow,
And just like them we all know,
True-Beauty comes from above.
It can only flourish if we live and love.
7 But the Lord said to Samuel, “Do not look on his appearance or on the height of his stature, because I have rejected him. For the Lord sees not as man sees: man looks on the outward appearance, but the Lord looks on the heart.” – 1st Samuel 16:7 (ESV)
(17)Iron sharpens iron, and one man sharpens another. (19) As in water face reflects face,
so the heart of man reflects the man. ` Proverbs 27:17; 19 (ESV)
Follow the Sun is a poem God gave to me about beauty. It really started out being a note to remind the 8th grade girls at my school that they are beautiful. I struggle with my self-image every day, so I know it feels nice when someone tells you “You’re pretty,” or “I like your shoes.” Just little things can make any day brighter, and so I decided to redeem notes by putting encouraging notes in my friends’ lockers. The catch is that they don’t know it’s from me, which I love because I sincerely hate the spot light. I can’t sit in the dead center or the front of the room when something is going on. It makes me feel that everyone is watching me, I immensely hate that feeling. Anyway, God gave me “Follow the Sun” while I was just editing my note, for my friends, in “Reminders,” on my iPad. Eventually it became something much more different than I thought, but it still serves it purpose in telling those who listen that they are and can be beautiful if they “Follow the Sun”.